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Almost Alone (Lyric) by sliver
Once broken, now she bends.She has learned to become more like a willow,
Than the oak she was.
Still she stands her ground,Although the healing is slow. The process
has brought her closer to home.
Looking back down the road, she can only see the shadows of places sheâ
s been.
and yet again she finds herself alone, shaking in the frost and snow
where she stands.
Finally starting to feel that maybe strength is overrated,
That maybe weakness was created just for her to find,
Until the bitter winter silence is broken by a cry, from the child at
her side,
and she remembers all the reasons why she started down this path.
Suddenly she finds that all her strength is back, so she continues down
that snowfilled track, swearing to herself that she will never again let
the past distract her from the goals that she has set.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.023713
Overall Rank: 7480
Posted: July 20, 2008 10:15 PM PDT; Last modified: July 23, 2008 7:46 PM PDT
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Verse 2 displays drunkenness; please proofread.
Verse 5 is a thing I learned 20 years ago. But Verse 6 blows it.
The final verse is a disappointment to a good poem. Goals should always be subject to change.