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Best friends (Sonnet) by amanda_dcosta
She lost her doll and then began to weep Searched high and low but was not to be found With eager eyes he let her have his jeep To play with it and roll it on the ground. She wiped her tears, surprised and looked at him. What would she do had he not saved her day? He beamed at her with pride and widest grin Together now they both began to play. She soon forgot the reason she was sad Nor he think of this jeep as being just his They played their games, had fun and were so glad To spend time as two happy little kids. Through hurt and laughter, we see in the end None can compare to having a best friend.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.0596013
Overall Rank: 6712
Posted: November 14, 2010 6:34 AM PST; Last modified: November 14, 2010 6:34 AM PST
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[8] Dovina @ 75.84.73.162 | 16-Nov-10/10:14 AM | Reply
Sounds like the mother of a good son or the memory of a child with a good brother
[n/a] amanda_dcosta @ 82.178.138.236 > Dovina | 26-Nov-10/11:04 AM | Reply
Yeah, something like that Dovina. Experiences do have a way of reflecting itself in what we write. Thanks for the vote.
[8] nypoet22 @ 65.34.245.31 | 13-Feb-11/12:27 AM | Reply
i have technical issues with this, but i can't even bring myself to voice them. it's just really sweet.
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