| Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments |
|
driftwood (Free verse) by ThePariahDog stiff as a board lying
in the wake of another dream
an imprint of your body fading
from my bed's white shore
"when will you be back?"
the soft breeze gone unanswered
lost to the loneliness of the wind
"i want you to come.."
yet a sudden realization sucked breath
from yearning's end
although death was on your lips last night
i will not forget what we had
Up the ladder:
At Sunset
Down the ladder:
metaphor
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Posted: October 7, 2010 7:59 PM PDT; Last modified: October 7, 2010 7:59 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.2384057 Overall Rank: 4090 Comments:
[8]
Dovina @ 111.88.56.68
|
11-Oct-10/12:33 AM
|
Reply
I remember the ancient times when, if memory presents truth, you were young and wrote young. Now this is good, shrouded just enough. Poemranker is abandoned now, all hands jumped ship. It must leave an able seaman wondering why he signed on.
125 view(s)
|
||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
