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That man looks so familiar (Free verse) by A. Nomaly And this is a declaration of every kind, skyped thru black
holed veins & illuminated by ufos, footnoted with sliding
mirrored closet doors shattered by goats finding refuge in
our house.
I wonder what they found in our house.
A very clean carpet, inch long black hairs both dog and human, a tv
remote, a ten dollar coffee machine in orange plastic.
Up the ladder:
First Love
Down the ladder:
All About Mistakes
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Posted: December 7, 2010 4:25 AM PST; Last modified: December 7, 2010 4:25 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.6723537 Overall Rank: 2060 Comments:
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Dovina @ 208.127.228.72
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12-Feb-11/8:13 PM
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best in the last ten posted :)
very sensory, i like it. first line is a bit incongruent with the rest, and so is the middle line. what effect were you going for?
what is our is now not ours
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