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Free verse № 159635

That man looks so familiar

Member since 2002 · Posted 7 Dec 2010 · 4 comments

And this is a declaration of every kind, skyped thru black holed veins & illuminated by ufos, footnoted with sliding mirrored closet doors shattered by goats finding refuge in our house. I wonder what they found in our house. A very clean carpet, inch long black hairs both dog and human, a tv remote, a ten dollar coffee machine in orange plastic.

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[8] Dovina 12-Feb-11/8:13 PM Reply
best in the last ten posted :)
[8] nypoet22 12-Feb-11/11:12 PM Reply
very sensory, i like it. first line is a bit incongruent with the rest, and so is the middle line. what effect were you going for?
[n/a] A. Nomaly › nypoet22 23-Feb-11/6:42 AM Reply
what is our is now not ours
[9] wDaphnew 26-Sep-11/11:05 AM Reply
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