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All About Mistakes (Lyric) by travelingsk8er Concrete, Asphalt, Rocks all around,
It really hurts when you fall down.
Long hair, Pretty eyes, Sun in your face,
Some things vanish without a trace.
Cool shades, Skateboard, you wont get far,
If you get hit by that car.
(chorus)
You, are my mistake.
Please dont listen...I'm always wrong.
Please dont walk away now..or yu'll have a mistake too.
Up the ladder:
From Womb To Wood
Down the ladder:
Lonely Night
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Posted: November 28, 2004 5:43 PM PST; Last modified: November 28, 2004 5:43 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.6723537 Overall Rank: 2062 Comments:
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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.153.196.50
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5-Dec-04/12:17 PM
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Just when I thought it couldn't get any better, you include an utterly random chorus at the end. Nice one!!!11
How can she walk away if she's on skates?
what r u talking about?
no one is on skates....only a skateboard 196 view(s)
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