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Memory Fragment I (lets kill eachother) (Other) by SupremeDreamer
"lets kill eachother- never liked you much anyway." I smiled, and kept silent. "you know, silence doesn't mean your smart asshole" "it leaves room to show your stupidity atleast." He frowned "lets just kill eachother." (stubborn son of a bitch..) finally turning twards his fat face "why? you suffer more alive than dead." "maybe your merciful." "Keep wishin, like you said: I'm an asshole." He smiled, flipped me off, lit one up took a deep drag- then blew smoke in my face. "So mellow out asshole- smoke this and shut the fuck up." "I've just been waiting for you to fall back on old tactics- works everytime." "waste of my weed..."

Up the ladder: machiavellian
Down the ladder: Silver Sword

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.5
Weighted score: 5.6723537
Overall Rank: 2012
Posted: December 8, 2003 4:51 AM PST; Last modified: December 8, 2003 4:51 AM PST
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[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 67.30.99.143 | 8-Dec-03/4:53 AM | Reply
Oh, CLS? Why not mention your reasons for zeroing my work this time? hrmm? or will you just zero it and say nothing as usual?

Just curiouse.
[8] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.53 | 8-Dec-03/6:12 AM | Reply
a nice pothead snapshot. Funny.

reminds me of a newstory I read last week about a guy who wanted to eat someone so he put an ad in the paper and someone responded. They ate the guys arms together then he killed the doner and ate the rest of him. All consentual (the guy still got in trouble, seems murder is *illegal*).

true story.
[9] The_Third_Isis @ 68.5.128.151 | 8-Dec-03/8:59 AM | Reply
Lets not kill each other for now lets wayt till va
I liked your bravadoelentines day massacre 04. Hatred grrrrrr so passionate...There's more weed...kiss the stubborn sob I got one he's my pop's and hades was so afraid of letting him in that death turned it's back got paid of by satan. he survided a 11 hour operation, pulled he's breathing and nasal/g tube's out no -shit in intensive care /and is now meaner than ever..those pale as blue ice eyes of he's mean bussiness/ walking talking and kicking the doct's asses Kiss and love the ole bastard till v-day chucle. have a great xmas hope santa brings you some maui wowie or kauai electric. a 9
[8] dragonfly @ 65.234.197.7 | 8-Dec-03/10:01 PM | Reply
I met these two people.
[n/a] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.175.154 > dragonfly | 10-Dec-03/6:12 PM | Reply
You've met me and my friend robert? Well then, who are you?
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