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That man looks so familiar (Free verse) by A. Nomaly

And this is a declaration of every kind, skyped thru black holed veins & illuminated by ufos, footnoted with sliding mirrored closet doors shattered by goats finding refuge in our house. I wonder what they found in our house. A very clean carpet, inch long black hairs both dog and human, a tv remote, a ten dollar coffee machine in orange plastic.

nypoet22 12-Feb-11/11:12 PM
very sensory, i like it. first line is a bit incongruent with the rest, and so is the middle line. what effect were you going for?




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