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My Brain (Free verse) by T. Jonathron Remp My Brain
By Jinny Slangst
My Brain,
Circus of circuits.
Twisting, tumbling,
Aqueduct of slime.
Everlasting fractal marzipan.
Up the ladder:
Life
Down the ladder:
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Posted: December 29, 2010 8:50 AM PST; Last modified: December 29, 2010 8:50 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.537883 Overall Rank: 2555 Comments:
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Dovina @ 208.127.228.72
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12-Feb-11/8:12 PM
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hehe
interesting! if you start with circus of circuits and remove "of slime. everlasting," it'd be a damnfine haiku.
interesting! if you start with methamphetamines and remove "all your psychosexual hangups," you'd be a damnfine person.
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