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My Brain (Free verse) by T. Jonathron Remp
My Brain By Jinny Slangst My Brain, Circus of circuits. Twisting, tumbling, Aqueduct of slime. Everlasting fractal marzipan.

Up the ladder: The Rockets’ Song

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.537883
Overall Rank: 2563
Posted: December 29, 2010 8:50 AM PST; Last modified: December 29, 2010 8:50 AM PST
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[5] Dovina @ 208.127.228.72 | 12-Feb-11/8:12 PM | Reply
hehe
[8] nypoet22 @ 65.34.245.31 | 12-Feb-11/11:06 PM | Reply
interesting! if you start with circus of circuits and remove "of slime. everlasting," it'd be a damnfine haiku.
[n/a] T. Jonathron Remp @ 70.253.91.227 > nypoet22 | 9-Apr-11/8:30 PM | Reply
interesting! if you start with methamphetamines and remove "all your psychosexual hangups," you'd be a damnfine person.
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