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Mittens (Free verse) by somemorepoetry When they turn, they'll fall
That's when smoke will rise up from my fire
As I burn them in piles
Leaving ashes
For my children to stare at and mourn
There is nothing else to rake
My yard is empty
Ready for grass to grow
Nothing but the little mittens chasing me
Remind me that there are always more
Up the ladder:
Train of Thought
Down the ladder:
Enrapture
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Posted: December 14, 2003 12:37 PM PST; Last modified: December 14, 2003 12:37 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.537883 Overall Rank: 2542 Comments:
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<{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.116.54
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14-Dec-03/5:31 PM
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Also, really really good. 10
when mittens turn, they fall? the title into the first line misleads me. i know what you are talking about, i just don't like the stretch.
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