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My Brain (Free verse) by T. Jonathron Remp

My Brain By Jinny Slangst My Brain, Circus of circuits. Twisting, tumbling, Aqueduct of slime. Everlasting fractal marzipan.

nypoet22 12-Feb-11/11:06 PM
interesting! if you start with circus of circuits and remove "of slime. everlasting," it'd be a damnfine haiku.




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