| Re: levity kiss by skaskowski |
ecargo 172.140.127.220 |
15-Jan-06/9:11 AM |
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I get the "rules"-Leviticus intent, I guess (Leviticus is the book that deals w/ rules and ritual, right?), but the connection seems flimsy.
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| Re: Do 20 always make this poem sense? by Prince of Void |
Prince of Void 213.207.224.156 |
15-Jan-06/7:39 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Racism 2 by Dovina |
amanda_dcosta 203.145.159.37 |
15-Jan-06/1:25 AM |
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Poems on racism seem to stress on prejudices, pride and a whole lot of superfacial crap. This is a very sensitive topic: it seems to show that you are determined on conveying your idea on Racism or trying to prove that one set of humans is superior, or that one is inferior. I would rather like to see something like "We are the world.... we are the children".
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| Re: a comment on Sunlighting by ALChemy |
amanda_dcosta 203.145.159.37 |
15-Jan-06/1:12 AM |
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Al, thanks for the advice. hope something good comes out of this.
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| Re: a comment on Dear M Foucault, or, How I knew our relationship was doomed by zodiac |
zodiac 209.193.18.212 |
15-Jan-06/12:49 AM |
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Good call. Neither is yours.
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| Re: Dear M Foucault, or, How I knew our relationship was doomed by zodiac |
PoeticXTC 205.188.117.10 |
14-Jan-06/8:20 PM |
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| Re: On the Discovery of Cheez Wiz/The Day I Fell Off the Earth by MacFrantic |
PoeticXTC 205.188.117.10 |
14-Jan-06/8:14 PM |
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| Re: Cool In The Army by wilco |
PoeticXTC 205.188.117.10 |
14-Jan-06/8:12 PM |
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| Re: On the Discovery of Cinder Cats and The Road More Traveled by MacFrantic |
PoeticXTC 205.188.117.10 |
14-Jan-06/8:11 PM |
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| Re: a comment on A Haiku by amanda_dcosta |
amanda_dcosta 203.145.159.37 |
14-Jan-06/7:32 PM |
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Thanks a ton. Most hepful. I should be able to do it! Looks like its centred around nature........... and am still going thru it. Shall try some more haikus. Wish me luck. ;-)
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| Re: killer boredom butterfly (esoteric) by nentwined |
PoeticXTC 152.163.100.135 |
14-Jan-06/6:08 PM |
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| Re: killer boredom butterfly (psychedelic) by nentwined |
PoeticXTC 152.163.100.135 |
14-Jan-06/6:05 PM |
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| Re: dit da haiku by nentwined |
PoeticXTC 152.163.100.135 |
14-Jan-06/6:02 PM |
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lol, answer your cell phone!!! Lmao!
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| Re: Censor by nentwined |
PoeticXTC 152.163.100.135 |
14-Jan-06/6:01 PM |
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| Re: why? by nentwined |
PoeticXTC 152.163.100.135 |
14-Jan-06/5:56 PM |
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Man, you started off excellent. Just wished the ending was more intense.
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| Re: a comment on Hoi Polloi by INTRANSIT |
nentwined 68.232.253.122 |
14-Jan-06/5:44 PM |
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sorry, color me oblivious, still. :/
The only connotation to huffing I've got is inhalants. And/or, breathing in the cold. And/or the big bad wolf...
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| Re: Chills by BrandonW |
PoeticXTC 152.163.100.135 |
14-Jan-06/4:52 PM |
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Your right, anxiety is the enemy.
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| Re: Thespian by BrandonW |
PoeticXTC 152.163.100.135 |
14-Jan-06/4:49 PM |
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But over all the negative comments it made since
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| Re: a comment on Racism 2 by Dovina |
ALChemy 24.74.101.159 |
14-Jan-06/11:13 AM |
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The guys at work are thinking about making me an honorary "brotha". If you ever saw me you'd know how funny that is.
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| Re: Racism 2 by Dovina |
zodiac 209.193.18.212 |
14-Jan-06/10:50 AM |
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In short, if you want to improve your poetry, consider selling your house in Orange County, quitting your job, and moving somewhere with real ethnic balance, like Charlotte.
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