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Racism 2 (Free verse) by Dovina
Retreating the cliché
of suburb homogeneity,
tired of yuppie hype,
she gravitates against advice,
like lightning to resentmentâs rod,
and comes by rail to LAâs inner core,
with a twenty and a body,
both kept close,
mostly out of sight.
The white patron wanders,
alone in poor, non-white
inner city streets,
known for moral turpitude,
shopping at the liquor store,
the greasy hot-dog stand.
Treated warmly and with courtesy,
she thinks and almost says,
quite a different way
from how we treated you.
Exemplary, is what they mean,
she figures on the train,
as in, weâd like the same
in your hometown.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6
Weighted score: 4.9523187
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Posted: January 12, 2006 7:10 PM PST; Last modified: January 12, 2006 7:10 PM PST
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