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where i end and crysta begins (Free verse) by TheLegacy
the morning sun peeks
pastel through the curtains
its warmth settles onto my shoulder
i inhale you with every breath i take
the hazy sunlight accents your soft curves
as you lay, dreaming
i can't tell where the silk sheets end
and your skin begins
thoughts of you still caress my flesh
as i bask in the afterglow
and when i reach out to pull you to me
you turn and snuggle so close
if i didn't know better
if i could only feel
and if it wasn't for your gentle breath on my chest
then i would say we were one
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6
Weighted score: 4.9523187
Overall Rank: 8957
Posted: April 12, 2004 11:45 PM PDT; Last modified: April 12, 2004 11:45 PM PDT
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