Shut Me Up

Member since 2004 · Posted 3 Jan 2006 · 2 comments

Words are not enough to make a rhyme It takes a couple moments set in time Between us both I'm sure we'll find a song A little love to which we'll sing along I never want to see you shed a tear So hold me close and I will hold you dear And if for all the world you cannot speak Just shut me up, and silence I will seek

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[4] LilMsLadyPoet 3-Jan-06/8:52 PM Reply

I take it you are young or a 'young' writer.
This wasn't impressive, but keep trying.

[10] ALChemy 4-Jan-06/3:53 PM Reply

It's perfect in a plain and ordinary kind of way.