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Shut Me Up (Free verse) by D. $ Fontera Words are not enough to make a rhyme
It takes a couple moments set in time
Between us both I'm sure we'll find a song
A little love to which we'll sing along
I never want to see you shed a tear
So hold me close and I will hold you dear
And if for all the world you cannot speak
Just shut me up, and silence I will seek
Up the ladder:
where i end and crysta begins
Down the ladder:
Oh
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Posted: January 3, 2006 12:24 PM PST; Last modified: January 3, 2006 12:24 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.9523187 Overall Rank: 8958 Comments:
It's perfect in a plain and ordinary kind of way.
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This wasn't impressive, but keep trying.