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On the Discovery of Cheez Wiz/The Day I Fell Off the Earth (Limerick) by MacFrantic You dare not begin to dizmiss
A wonderful cheez such az this
Cauz izn't it grand
That a wiz in a can
Will ignite such a felling of bliss?
Its increasingly odd what I see
That the Earth is as round as can be
Yet here I do float
Without ship raft or boat
And from space it sure looks flat to me
Up the ladder:
Unsung california dreamin.
Down the ladder:
The recovery room
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Posted: April 14, 2004 7:25 PM PDT; Last modified: April 14, 2004 7:25 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7695 Comments:
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oftherealm @ 4.138.25.95
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15-Apr-04/12:19 AM
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why not change all the s's?
I only changed the s's that have the "z" sound.
lol
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