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On the Discovery of Cheez Wiz/The Day I Fell Off the Earth (Limerick) by MacFrantic
You dare not begin to dizmiss A wonderful cheez such az this Cauz izn't it grand That a wiz in a can Will ignite such a felling of bliss? Its increasingly odd what I see That the Earth is as round as can be Yet here I do float Without ship raft or boat And from space it sure looks flat to me

Up the ladder: Still Air Sticks
Down the ladder: Countervail

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7655
Posted: April 14, 2004 7:25 PM PDT; Last modified: April 14, 2004 7:25 PM PDT
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[4] oftherealm @ 4.138.25.95 | 15-Apr-04/12:19 AM | Reply
why not change all the s's?
[n/a] MacFrantic @ 204.98.23.83 | 15-Apr-04/6:58 AM | Reply
I only changed the s's that have the "z" sound.
[7] PoeticXTC @ 205.188.117.10 | 14-Jan-06/8:14 PM | Reply
lol
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