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looking for (Free verse) by Phalkon i sit
i stare
i hate
my chair
i use my pen when it still has ink
but i can't think of anything to waste it on
the keyboard gives me solace
in a room too-brightly lit for my eyes.
peace...
inner workings of the machine scream at me (while i walk)
i am machine
i am man
i am without point
i am looking for
Up the ladder:
i'm falling for u damnit!
Down the ladder:
Desperation
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Posted: February 23, 2007 3:21 PM PST; Last modified: February 23, 2007 3:21 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 7697 Comments:
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SupremeDreamer @ 68.111.43.247
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23-Feb-07/3:51 PM
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Four.
pointlessness, writer's block, man-as-machine - dismal topics overdone.
before my pen pin down what's in my head
I had stared at darkness it holds all paths for the peace it carry me away from the cybernetic world to the timeless place as i'm looking for the point on the pointless ocean i could be placeless evermore
Writers block, It's easier if you try to eat Cherrio's with a fork. :) Bethy
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