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why? (Pimple) by nentwined Existence
pointless
pleasure
outweighed by pain
outweighed by blah
outweighed by --
Up the ladder:
and you
Down the ladder:
Piccadilly to Baker Street
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Posted: December 26, 2005 5:10 PM PST; Last modified: December 26, 2005 5:11 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.611111 Overall Rank: 2270 Comments:
just when you thaink that this is it, a train throws itself under your feet.
There's something in that.
no meaning in existence
only what you make, perhaps.
-- = one never-ending moment of ecstasy.
... I woosh into the void of her infinity.
A single leaf falls.
Ouch.
no crimson?
Man, you started off excellent. Just wished the ending was more intense.
tripe of the highst order
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How about?
"outweighed by You, you fat-assed, blood-sucking, faithless whore! But I will take you back,
if you ask." That's a pimple '10.'