why?

by nentwined

Member since 2001 · Posted 26 Dec 2005 · 12 comments

Existence pointless pleasure outweighed by pain outweighed by blah outweighed by --

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[7] Dan garcia-Black 26-Dec-05/7:18 PM Reply

A good pimple but for a great pimple the end has to be about "Her."
How about?
"outweighed by You, you fat-assed, blood-sucking, faithless whore! But I will take you back,
if you ask." That's a pimple '10.'

[n/a] nentwined › Dan garcia-Black 25-Feb-06/10:23 PM Reply

Agreed. :)

[n/a] INTRANSIT 26-Dec-05/7:46 PM Reply

just when you thaink that this is it, a train throws itself under your feet.

[n/a] nentwined › INTRANSIT 25-Feb-06/10:24 PM Reply

There's something in that.

[5] crazyknight 26-Dec-05/8:51 PM Reply

no meaning in existence

[n/a] nentwined › crazyknight 25-Feb-06/10:24 PM Reply

only what you make, perhaps.

[6] Dovina 26-Dec-05/9:21 PM Reply

-- = one never-ending moment of ecstasy.

[n/a] zodiac 27-Dec-05/9:20 PM Reply

... I woosh into the void of her infinity.
A single leaf falls.

[n/a] nentwined › zodiac 25-Feb-06/10:24 PM Reply

Ouch.

[n/a] Caducus 29-Dec-05/4:19 AM Reply

no crimson?

[8] PoeticXTC 14-Jan-06/5:56 PM Reply

Man, you started off excellent. Just wished the ending was more intense.

[0] Holy Tits 13-Mar-07/11:05 AM Reply

tripe of the highst order