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A Haiku (Haiku) by amanda_dcosta Tell me more, tell me more
A haiku's something I don't know.
A 5-7-5 or so?
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Posted: January 13, 2006 9:27 PM PST; Last modified: January 13, 2006 9:27 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.7615943 Overall Rank: 11685 Comments:
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amanda_dcosta @ 203.145.159.37
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13-Jan-06/9:28 PM
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This might be way off. Criticism welcome. I'm trying to figure it out..... though haven't had a lot of time to think about it. With kids.........!
Or even six-eight-six (or some other variation) if done right. The syllable count is the least of it. Very few (not I) can do it well, though.
Your name is fun to say.
is it? ;-)
Yes and I can speak Chinese, see: "Ching chang wongtong longshlong."
Just research Haikus on Google search and come to your own conclusion.
Thanks a ton. Most hepful. I should be able to do it! Looks like its centred around nature........... and am still going thru it. Shall try some more haikus. Wish me luck. ;-)
This is a meta-ku if anything.
1Tell 2me 3more, 4tell 5me 6more
1A 2hai 3ku's 4some 5thing 6I 7don't 8know. 1A 2-5 3-7 4-5 5or 6so? Nice. A good commentary on the limitations of haiku-length.
"Tell me more, tell me more, that you don't got her preg
Tell me more, tell me more, cause he sounds like a drag" -Grease 249 view(s)
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