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Free verse № 109290

Untitled

Member since 2004 · Posted 29 Jul 2004 · 1 comment

On the tracks of the train The sides of the mountain Bursting with green lush Dotted villages busy with life Air fresh and pleasant The rain pelting the land with hope Right here in a ditch on the side A man lay awkwardly and died The train moved and the rain stopped

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[1] leonxic 3-Aug-04/5:33 AM Reply
*vomit*