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Untitled (Free verse) by katinchina On the tracks of the train
The sides of the mountain
Bursting with green lush
Dotted villages busy with life
Air fresh and pleasant
The rain pelting the land with hope
Right here in a ditch on the side
A man lay awkwardly and died
The train moved and the rain stopped
Up the ladder:
Old Friends
Down the ladder:
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Posted: July 29, 2004 8:23 AM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2004 8:23 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.7615943 Overall Rank: 11666 Comments:
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leonxic @ 80.205.204.53
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3-Aug-04/5:33 AM
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*vomit*
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