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A Haiku (Haiku) by amanda_dcosta

Tell me more, tell me more A haiku's something I don't know. A 5-7-5 or so?

zodiac 17-Jan-06/10:33 AM
1Tell 2me 3more, 4tell 5me 6more
1A 2hai 3ku's 4some 5thing 6I 7don't 8know.
1A 2-5 3-7 4-5 5or 6so?

Nice. A good commentary on the limitations of haiku-length.




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