Re: The Grandfather Suite by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.117.218	15-May-06/4:58 PM
Not very funny.
Re: Perfect place by gothiclovepoetiss	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.117.218	15-May-06/4:58 PM
Not a limerick.
Re: Absolute Truth (about Quarton) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.117.218	15-May-06/4:56 PM
inconsequentially boring.
Re: WhyI laugh with Moses. by <{Baba^Yaga}>	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.117.218	15-May-06/4:56 PM
Studded with illiteracy; overlong; but at least a teeeeeeeeny bit amusing. Splling dreadful.
Re: The band "Sigh" aced their MENSA tests by Jeremi B. Handrinos	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.117.218	15-May-06/4:55 PM
Pitiful. Pathetic. Abysmal.
Re: AIDS in a nurse by <{Baba^Yaga}>	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.117.218	15-May-06/4:54 PM
Raped/plate/stapled do NOT rhyme. You must have the aural equivalent of dyslexia.
Re: Limericks of hot seething love, gone bad. by horus8	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.117.218	15-May-06/4:53 PM
Poor.
Re: Quadroons by Shardik	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.117.218	15-May-06/4:52 PM
knobs or nobs? Oh dear. 1/10
Re: Fireworks & Family Reunions (Randel's cry for love) by Shardik	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.117.218	15-May-06/4:52 PM
Bad rhyming, unamusing, this has everything. I wish I could score it minus.
Re: My pimp's ceiling fan by Shardik	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.117.218	15-May-06/4:51 PM
Appallingly unamusing and badly rhymed too.
Re: The Prodigal Daughter by Dovina	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.117.218	15-May-06/4:49 PM
You could do with some punctuation.
Re: I'M by freakything	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.117.218	15-May-06/4:49 PM
awful.
Re: Room 34 Ashford Hospital by Caducus	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.117.218	15-May-06/4:48 PM
Very cunty funny.
Re: Divorcing Tennessee by Dovina	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.117.218	15-May-06/4:45 PM
Not good. Parochial rubbish in fact.
Re: One Moment to the Other (v3) by nentwined	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.117.218	15-May-06/4:44 PM
pretentious.
Re: Old Friends by sliver	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.117.218	15-May-06/4:43 PM
A bit dull.
Re: Is Dying Ugly? by D. $ Fontera	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.117.218	15-May-06/4:39 PM
Not my taste, babe.
Re: With a pithy stroke by D. $ Fontera	Edna Sweetlove 81.178.117.218	15-May-06/4:38 PM
This is bollocks. Your others are better (I hope)
Re: a comment on Cupid Missed Two Junkies (slightly clearer, rambling draft) by Ranger	Ranger 62.252.32.15	15-May-06/1:48 PM
Yeah, the cuckoo's supposed to reflect the out-of-mind state, but also being among the apples (bitter spheres) like a cuckoo is in another bird's nest (eggs). I need to fix that bit, make it clearer, it does have meaning but not one that's brought out well enough just yet. This is a very experimental draft. Frustrating as hell though, I sort of know what I want to say and how I want to say it...but the translation on paper just doesn't work. Ah well, we can but hope.
Re: a comment on The Prodigal Daughter by Dovina	Ranger 62.252.32.15	15-May-06/1:45 PM
Ah, okay - agreed the italics would work better in this instance. It's much clearer with 'will' instead of 'would'. I got your message by the way - am busy writing on there at the moment, but I will reply asap.