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AIDS in a nurse (Limerick) by <{Baba^Yaga}> There once was some AIDS in a nurse,
but the prognosis gets even worse.
Because she came down with SARS,
from cruising the bars.
With no Kung-foo-gayce in her purse.
Because, one fateful night she got raped.
By a delivery boy and his plate
of General Tsao's chicken,
with an autistic Wiccan.
That coughed where his chopstick was stapled.
Up the ladder:
flight
Down the ladder:
the absent-minded walk on the proverbial mountainside of nothingness + my mother's old tampons
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Posted: May 7, 2003 8:52 PM PDT; Last modified: May 10, 2003 3:07 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.878157 Overall Rank: 10315 Comments:
Dark Angel is better. He is my hero.
Raped/plate/stapled do NOT rhyme. You must have the aural equivalent of dyslexia.
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I'd like to see "even gets" changed around, it sounds better. 8