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Cupid Missed Two Junkies (slightly clearer, rambling draft) (Free verse) by Ranger
You are a small gold leaf blown over warm earth
Like a kiss-
Content at rest
But if you had these eyes, then you would see
See him sitting in the arms of an apple tree
She will hold him with every other seeking bliss
For he is a wandering cuckoo in an unfamiliar nest,
Surrounded by bitter spheres
If emerald, they watch, blinkless, cold and veined
If crimson he fears stigmata's hold;
Palm outstretched and strained to receive his share of blood
Wrist stud nearly tearing, fiercely threshed-
Nervous in anticipation of more pierced flesh
If Cupid will tell of directness
And steadfastness of hands through surging hearts,
Then you would be like that arrow:
A sketch of his desire while still he stays caressed in bark-skinned
curl
Fingers still stretched
But his fist closed around a different mark of nature
Scattered beside him lingered frozen dew
Where he joined every apple, cast down-
Hoarfrost-white veil blinded him to you
While feeling sun touch skin he turned, trapped in
Amber
Turned
Like you, leaf, slowly flipping over, dozed
Before you skipped away from the orchard
Her blossom, his fall
And, choking on greed and ecstasy, he
He should have known that not all
acid
is
citrus
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Posted: May 12, 2006 11:33 AM PDT; Last modified: May 16, 2006 4:32 AM PDT
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