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untitled (Free verse) by AM I EVIL? im lost in a forrest of illusion
twisting in my own confusion
im scarred of my imagination
everything i see is my creation
i wish everything would dissapear
after that would i see clear?
but no its still cloudy and grey
and its taking my life away
im so unsure of my thoughts
everything i think of rots
what am i supposed to do?
i dont know so i ask you
Up the ladder:
missing
Down the ladder:
Confusion
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Posted: September 2, 2004 9:50 PM PDT; Last modified: September 2, 2004 9:50 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.1788044 Overall Rank: 4950 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.130.62.63
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3-Sep-04/3:20 PM
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A potato chip in a flash flood.
This is a poem I think a lot can relate to...lots of us are unsure of our thoughts at one point in our lives...this one I liked too...
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