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untitled (Free verse) by AM I EVIL?
im lost in a forrest of illusion twisting in my own confusion im scarred of my imagination everything i see is my creation i wish everything would dissapear after that would i see clear? but no its still cloudy and grey and its taking my life away im so unsure of my thoughts everything i think of rots what am i supposed to do? i dont know so i ask you

Up the ladder: Openings
Down the ladder: dont bite my candy neck

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.1788044
Overall Rank: 4909
Posted: September 2, 2004 9:50 PM PDT; Last modified: September 2, 2004 9:50 PM PDT
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[n/a] horus8 @ 24.130.62.63 | 3-Sep-04/3:20 PM | Reply
A potato chip in a flash flood.
[10] redneck_woman3322 @ 216.129.234.159 | 20-Sep-04/9:56 AM | Reply
This is a poem I think a lot can relate to...lots of us are unsure of our thoughts at one point in our lives...this one I liked too...
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