huh... maybe it is fitting that the structure is set up like it is: fairly lucid, then almost frenetic and disjointed, until a rather slow "crash" to a more lucid state.
ever listen to skinny puppy? go read some of their lyrics... there's a trip for ya:
http://www.lyricsdir.com/skinny-puppy-lyrics.html
http://www.lyricsdir.com/skinny-puppy-addiction-lyrics.html
http://www.lyricsdir.com/skinny-puppy-last-call-lyrics.html
http://www.lyricsdir.com/skinny-puppy-spasmolytic-lyrics.html
http://www.lyricsdir.com/skinny-puppy-worlock-lyrics.html
much of their stuff doesn't seem to make sense, and other stuff is all dubbed clips. and it all seems much better heard than it does read. anyway...
hey, i caught your trademark leaf image... i also like the title bit: "temporally uncertain" . a play on "temporarily uncertain"?
so i'm gonna vote a 7 for now; i know you mean to tighten this up. it will be very interesting to read as it develops.