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Rocky Road (Free verse) by Dovina
Westward pavement,
rubberized asphalt
made from big-rig tires.
Newer versions roll thereon
taking others to be ground.
Now the tires, old and new,
throb with pound of trailer,
the last of eighteen wheels to pass
a place of sweet remembrance.
Driver drowsy drifts to shoulder,
wakes in time to whip it back.
Trailer wags a whimsic wander,
out to gravel shoulder drifts.
The rightmost tire grabs a rock
in crevice of its tread;
Lifts it, slings it,
Upward, backward
With cracking speed to glass.
Flaps outstretched like waving hands
wish that rock goodbye.
The driver blinks and straightens,
vows to stay awake,
recalls a special deal he got
one snowy day in Denverâ
fancy flaps with woman nude,
tits up and facing back.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.1788044
Overall Rank: 4941
Posted: October 11, 2005 9:31 PM PDT; Last modified: October 12, 2005 7:15 AM PDT
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A really fun read with a groovy beat.