| Re: Song of Creation by amanda_dcosta |
amanda_dcosta 82.178.134.19 |
22-Apr-11/2:13 PM |
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Glossary of music terms:
Legato - string of notes, Fortissimo - very loud sound, Piano - soft (sound), Dolce - sweet, Mezzo-forte - moderately loud, Maestoso - majestically , forte - very loud, Silenzio - silence
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| Re: a comment on My Brain by T. Jonathron Remp |
T. Jonathron Remp 70.253.91.227 |
9-Apr-11/8:30 PM |
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interesting! if you start with methamphetamines and remove "all your psychosexual hangups," you'd be a damnfine person.
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| Re: a comment on The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
ARTIE 66.69.245.233 |
31-Mar-11/8:57 PM |
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I did not write that. Someone stole my IP
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| Re: Journey To The Centre Of The Loom by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
ARTIE 66.69.245.233 |
31-Mar-11/8:50 PM |
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3rd stanza is somewhat weak but overall this is very good..... "return to tend the gloom"
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| Re: Two More Cunts Who Are One Cunt by mr cunt |
ARTIE 66.69.245.233 |
31-Mar-11/8:46 PM |
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Stunt.... Stunk.... Stunts
Wholly fun-k "Fat-Man"
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| Re: FHjk by Dark Angle |
ARTIE 66.69.245.233 |
31-Mar-11/8:42 PM |
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There once was a man named d-Angle
whose dick couldn't find a quadrangle
he'd pop a blue pill
which made him quite ill
but his mum was left quite tranquil
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| Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
ARTIE 66.69.245.233 |
31-Mar-11/8:30 PM |
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There once was a poett named D'Angel
Whose words try to be quite playful
He'll work up a rhyme
tho' he'll often commit grime
'cause to others he's often quite hateful.
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| Re: a comment on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
ARTIE 66.69.245.233 |
31-Mar-11/8:13 PM |
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w-e-a-k....(gasp - wheeze...gasp) p-p-pull my finger...
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| Re: a comment on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
ARTIE 66.69.245.233 |
31-Mar-11/8:11 PM |
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Sorry I've been away for so long and sorry to see you have nothing more to offer mankind than your sorry poetic manifestoes of self-[bravado].
Go ahead and seek what you [wish] to reap for you will be pushed like a beaver up the stream - dam-ned to succeed.
Your sarchasm is not as [deep] as you may feel.
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| Re: a comment on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
ARTIE 66.69.245.233 |
31-Mar-11/8:06 PM |
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Very intelligent. What's neckst?
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| Re: Dance Of Insanity by forsaken |
ARTIE 66.69.245.233 |
31-Mar-11/8:01 PM |
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Have you grown up dreaming of a disenfranchised Jeffrey Dahmer? He's dead.
Come back.... come back to the World in which the rest of us live. Sanity is knot a b-b-bad thing.
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| Re: Twilight Affair by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
ARTIE 66.69.245.233 |
31-Mar-11/7:56 PM |
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A little "wordy" and somewhat essential and intrinsic. However, it works in a diminished cerebral way. 8-9 score
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| Re: a comment on (untitled) by A. Nomaly |
A. Nomaly 61.90.70.118 |
23-Feb-11/6:44 AM |
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thanks. I did mean lashed
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| Re: a comment on That man looks so familiar by A. Nomaly |
A. Nomaly 61.90.70.118 |
23-Feb-11/6:42 AM |
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what is our is now not ours
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| Re: It Is by Skamper |
nypoet22 65.34.245.31 |
18-Feb-11/4:17 PM |
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it'd be funny if he said it's a big dinosaur that helps you with your homework :)
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| Re: a comment on Late Song by nypoet22 |
nypoet22 65.34.245.31 |
18-Feb-11/4:12 PM |
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you're right, pine is very old-fashioned which makes it sound awkward in that usage. i like it though, so i'm taking it back. good criticism, i'll have to think on what to do with that last want, and a number of other similar repetitions, to stop the song from droning on too long.
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| Re: Self-Inflicted Wounds by wilco |
Skamper 120.156.164.180 |
18-Feb-11/3:13 PM |
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at least your just rusty, I, on the other hand am flabby...takes a bit of getting back into it huh?
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| Re: Mornings by alvinb |
Skamper 120.156.164.180 |
18-Feb-11/3:09 PM |
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oh dear...what do you think is for you proper? Sounds like you think you deserve something better, we have only what we create and if your creation is words, make them come alive.
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| Re: Late Song by nypoet22 |
Skamper 120.156.164.180 |
18-Feb-11/2:57 PM |
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Whenever I pine for you to be mine
I remember what my father used to say
You can have anything you want but you cant have
everything you want at the same time
If this is what you want
you can't have me
there's probably one too many wants...if this is what you need
you can't have me
and pine, really?
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| Re: tree in a flood by Skamper |
Skamper 120.156.164.180 |
18-Feb-11/2:51 PM |
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too quick and too flabby, hmmm something to ponder over. Thanks guys
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