poemranker ::(untitled) by A. Nomaly

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Free verse № 159634

(untitled)

Member since 2002 · Posted 1 Dec 2010 · 2 comments

I was asking about the rain and the fortitude simply because you left it open so abruptly and I forgot everything just then. I needed a reminder. This time was different, you promised and I agreed, it was. Retelling would make it even more so I hoped, but this is what happened. Each word lashed on to what happened before, before, before, skipping stones plunging, military uniforms, sleeves rolled up, medals polished.

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[9] nypoet22 12-Feb-11/11:19 PM Reply
the tone and voice are polished. i like this even better than the other one. i may be mistaken but i think you meant either latched or leashed rather than lashed. otherwise top notch.
[n/a] A. Nomaly › nypoet22 23-Feb-11/6:44 AM Reply
thanks. I did mean lashed