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Life (Free verse) by NobodysSon
Here among thorns and strangers,
Roaming empty halls of stone,
They steal my charms and magicks
As fast as I can cast them.
A life time of tricks learned
To hide from myself
Are stripped away by dizzying, horrifying, demented
REALITY.
An ancient numbing poison,
Tested over vast slow eons,
Drags me down into closed dark spaces
Where long forgotten titans lie,
Shifting in this ultimate gloom,
Their sighs told and retold
By those that put us here
In a macabre mimicry
Of things once held light and dear.
They smother me with my greatest fear-
Life.
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Weighted score: 5.357609
Overall Rank: 3376
Posted: February 27, 2004 6:38 PM PST; Last modified: February 27, 2004 6:38 PM PST
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I really wish it was something beside the word LIFE at the end.