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Dance Of Insanity (Free verse) by forsaken
I killed a little boy to dance in his blood
I shot him in the chest with my father's gun
The boy then fell in front of me, and I started to dance
His blood was shooting out of his chest
I didn't know it at first, but it was for the best
His mother is a bitch so his father left
She saw me rollimg in her son's blood
All she did was turn around
Not to tell anyone of what she found
I killed that boy, and now that boy is free, free from this world, free
from this hell, and now free from me
It drove me into insanity, without any chance of letting me free, free
from my insanity
I meant to kill that boy, but I'm the one who truly died
I then ripped him to pieces, and pulled him a part
I didn't know what else to do, so I ate is heart
Then I looked up at his face an realized that the boy, had no eyes
He was blind to the world, blind to all the hate
I then felt sorry for the boy, while I ate his face
Looking back the past, I might have felt a pain from this
But now all I feel is a void inside, it won't let me be
My heart is gone and I know it won't come back to me
I know now that the little boy was something deep inside of me
I could no longer let it be trapped inside of me
It was droving me into insnity, without any chance of letting me free,
free from my insanity
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.9636364
Weighted score: 6.963636
Overall Rank: 139
Posted: June 20, 2003 8:32 AM PDT; Last modified: July 18, 2003 10:06 AM PDT
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