Dan garcia-Black
on Down With Ingenuity by Dovina
30 Aug 2004, 10:38 PM
You get my vote.
who is this about
The only thing I'd change is punctuation in the first verse to match the others.
...what is 'they did it' supposed to mean. vague.
i admit it, youre darn good.
Far out.
I think this poem makes me sad and want to cry.
this is sad and very good.
i now that just checking to make sure
i liked it, -8-
*9* its okay..
Do you look these word up before you use them. Or are they brain-handy? I see you visited dale. I'm gonna have to dig it out and lay it down for good. if you know what I mean.
somone comment please