Odd.

All poems are useless drivel. The human race is useless drivel. Hey, two peas in a pod. Neither on better than the other. I feel better already.

Print this out and bring it by one day, we'll fix all the spelling, then I'll show you something you can put in it.

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NICE POEM!!! TRULY!!!

wonderful in all aspects of it

i love ur poem ...u deserve 10 .

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i know. innit great! we're all underdogs. mans best friend.

My dear Dovina- let me jump upon the "soapbox" with you. Woman after my own heart-

Beautiful Dan- I feel passion and sadness in this piece

Why the little finger, and not the "ring" or "wedding" finger?

I should rename myself Dawn - maybe after the election. "Returning as a star-born child" Hmmmm. Don't know what to make of it. Mysterious.

May I set her free? Real slow like? Hmm... Something fit this particular bird... Ah, yes! A good plucking perchance? Fried fucknut? Broiled biscuit? Peel the flesh right off the (ahem), pour something nasty and flammable all over her, set her afire and sing fuckin' Freebird at her as we to- no, FLING her off that bridge (must be higher or more trecherous out there?) Have you seen Northern Exsposure? The one where Chris builds that catapoult and flings a cow? Then, later, the coffin of his dead biker buddy? (grin like hell) We could do that! yeahyeahyeah!?! :D D.

too bad I can't spell, hmmm?

SICK! :D

agreed. I'll take note.

" for nothing but its own blind satisfaction" bingo. who approved this message?

Poor pony!?! Here's a carrot, horsey! tisk, tisk! Is this any way to treat an animal?!? grrrr...

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