klosterfobik
on Two Basic Forces by dougsoderstrom
1 Sep 2004, 7:38 PM
Is this poetry?
i guess
Dry Dreaming.
Pure smut.
Ouch...
Bastards...
good work -10-
nemA
e
m
Amen. Nice construct.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
1 Sep 2004, 5:11 PM
No comments?
very good..i love this poem ...
Sometimes it rhymes, sometimes it don't, it is very hard to follow and understand, and should have been edited
nice
that's just gross
A little too much piss or not enough vinegar, naybe some vodka would help.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
1 Sep 2004, 5:10 PM
No votes or comments? Hmmm...that's new!
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
1 Sep 2004, 5:23 PM
cute..probably more cute than the situation...
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
1 Sep 2004, 5:25 PM
You know I always love your work!
I think that when people comment on someone else's poems that they should explain what they are saying if it is comment that u dont normally hear or frase hardly used.
FOR EXAMPLE-Coments such as
"meh."
&
"Are you really 22 years old? Lord jesu's benevolent ball sack"
&
"A tic turd on high wip"
&
"A little too much piss or not enough vinegar, naybe some vodka would help"