hope this is a prose poem as I'm green my friends so don't laugh at me if I'm completely wrong. xxx

She's young and don’t know nothing ‘bout life. A good He-done-her-wrong-song. But is crying bold? It seems more an escape from bold. The last verse - a nice switch.

Quite lame.

You've always got a positive message. ;0)

Works for me at this perfect moment.-10-

very powerful, angry and straight to the point....

hogwash? really? For some reason, I tink that word takes away from it...but thats just me. The rest is good though.

Like the feel and honesty - structure could be better. -8.5-

Sad when this sort of thing happens.

...roads must a man walk down, before you can call him a man? ...licks does it take to get to the center of a tootsie pop?

*9*

a little too...I don't know...Hallmarky for me..

So true.

very old-school.

noice

i really like this peice... it puts me in a certain state of mind

A finely crafted foam...

Wild

why are there hardly ne coments or votes 2 night on the poems

I LIKE THIS POEM! THAT MAY SOUND A LITTLE MORBID SINCE THAT THE POEM IS ABOUT DEATH. BUT I DO, I REALLY LIKE IT!