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One Perfect Moment (Free verse) by Leah11 Be still
This smell
This taste
This sound
Has been arranged into
One Perfect Moment
For only this instant will it exist
Its first breath will be its last
As brilliant as a full moon
With all its grace and promise
As light as a feather
As heavy as my heart
Be still
And watch it drift away
Up the ladder:
Tuna and sweetcorn
Down the ladder:
Soldiers (Terzanelle)
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Posted: September 2, 2004 8:29 AM PDT; Last modified: September 2, 2004 8:29 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.3337684 Overall Rank: 3464 Comments:
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Dan garcia-Black @ 66.218.59.113
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2-Sep-04/8:35 AM
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Works for me at this perfect moment.-10-
Only one? I hope there are many more to come.
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