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Hoodwinked (Free verse) by Dovina
Iâd been humbled before by his sweet-sounding song,
but he said he was sorry, this time heâd be true.
So, only with caution I lent him a chair,
thinking maybe this round heâll change and be fair.
We started our talk with his deep piercing questions,
my careful defensives and logical answers.
As evening wore on and my guest seemed to soften,
I let down my guard, felt cozy and warm,
Rested at sunset of umber, amber and gold.
Then without warning, he laughed a strong laugh.
âHogwash,â he said, âYouâre the dimmest of dim.â
For the fifth in five times Iâd been hoodwinked again.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.537883
Overall Rank: 2563
Posted: September 2, 2004 11:56 AM PDT; Last modified: September 2, 2004 11:56 AM PDT
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