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that conceited little bastard (Free verse) by BigB
Stop indulging in yourself, for you are no one. Self pleasure, self satisfaction, self importance, you're full of that. And you're swellling up real fast, yeah, you are. Till the clock strikes twelve today you'll see, the person who you thought will never be. Watch your steps little one, yeah, you'll wait and see.

Down the ladder: THEY SAY YOU ARE AN ANGEL

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.0
Weighted score: 4.7615943
Overall Rank: 11624
Posted: September 2, 2004 6:08 AM PDT; Last modified: September 2, 2004 6:08 AM PDT
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[7] Leah11 @ 144.138.106.61 | 2-Sep-04/8:54 AM | Reply
very powerful, angry and straight to the point....
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