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that conceited little bastard (Free verse) by BigB Stop indulging in yourself,
for you are no one.
Self pleasure, self satisfaction, self importance,
you're full of that.
And you're swellling up real fast,
yeah, you are.
Till the clock strikes twelve today you'll see,
the person who you thought will never be.
Watch your steps little one,
yeah, you'll wait and see.
Up the ladder:
The Crossing
Down the ladder:
To you
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Posted: September 2, 2004 6:08 AM PDT; Last modified: September 2, 2004 6:08 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.7615943 Overall Rank: 11620 Comments:
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Leah11 @ 144.138.106.61
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2-Sep-04/8:54 AM
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very powerful, angry and straight to the point....
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