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Free verse № 109312

Alone

Member since 2004 · Posted 29 Jul 2004 · 4 comments

Trapped inside a hollow shell, full of hate and fear. I search deep inside my soul, but the answers are not here. As I sit in solitude, I shed a lonely tear. Because I am not there with you, and because you are not here.

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4 comments

[10] tisa7 30-Aug-04/2:22 PM Reply
who is this about
[10] dancin_n_da_moonlite 10-Mar-05/1:13 PM Reply
i like this - but i must say i disagree

the answers are never in any one else but yourself, and if you are not finding them then you may not be ready to know -

but i don't think, even though we would all like to believe otherwise, that the answers can be found in any other person
-megan
[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 10-Mar-05/5:21 PM Reply
What sort of generic claptrap do you call this? How dare you sully the mantle with such a dumpling? Go away and don't come back until you've actually come up with an idea. This is a non-poeme. -10-
[2] nentwined 19-Feb-07/4:05 PM Reply
quick rhymes. trite poem.