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Alone (Free verse) by frdup717 Trapped inside a hollow shell,
full of hate and fear.
I search deep inside my soul,
but the answers are not here.
As I sit in solitude,
I shed a lonely tear.
Because I am not there with you,
and because you are not here.
Up the ladder:
Sleep
Down the ladder:
Leaving in the Morning
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Posted: July 29, 2004 2:39 PM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2004 2:39 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.537883 Overall Rank: 2602 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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tisa7 @ 4.14.129.6
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30-Aug-04/2:22 PM
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who is this about
i like this - but i must say i disagree
the answers are never in any one else but yourself, and if you are not finding them then you may not be ready to know - but i don't think, even though we would all like to believe otherwise, that the answers can be found in any other person -megan
What sort of generic claptrap do you call this? How dare you sully the mantle with such a dumpling? Go away and don't come back until you've actually come up with an idea. This is a non-poeme. -10-
quick rhymes. trite poem.
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