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Alone (Free verse) by frdup717

Trapped inside a hollow shell, full of hate and fear. I search deep inside my soul, but the answers are not here. As I sit in solitude, I shed a lonely tear. Because I am not there with you, and because you are not here.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 10-Mar-05/5:21 PM
What sort of generic claptrap do you call this? How dare you sully the mantle with such a dumpling? Go away and don't come back until you've actually come up with an idea. This is a non-poeme. -10-




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