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Out goes the baby with the garbage (Free verse) by INTRANSIT
Poor child. Keep that placenta on. It's the only stain defender you'll get and you've already lost it. Get all the beautysleep you can because your mother's not Laura Ashley and soon enough you'll fall to the ugly floor. Save your sneezes. Save every one of them in a rocket so that maybe some day you can sneeze snot and mucous and phlegm all over them and leave this place.

Up the ladder: Hiding
Down the ladder: Family

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.8333335
Weighted score: 5.493059
Overall Rank: 2773
Posted: August 30, 2004 7:00 AM PDT; Last modified: August 30, 2004 7:00 AM PDT
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[10] Dovina @ 24.52.157.176 | 30-Aug-04/9:52 AM | Reply
What a shock that must have been! No wonder I don't remember it. What an unruly eviction!
[10] Bachus @ 24.130.62.63 | 30-Aug-04/11:08 AM | Reply
Far out.
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