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Out goes the baby with the garbage (Free verse) by INTRANSIT
Poor child.
Keep that placenta on.
It's the only stain defender you'll get
and you've already lost it.
Get all the beautysleep you can
because your mother's not Laura Ashley
and soon enough
you'll fall to the ugly floor.
Save your sneezes.
Save every one of them
in a rocket
so that maybe
some day
you can sneeze snot and mucous and phlegm
all over them
and leave this place.
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Weighted score: 5.493059
Overall Rank: 2773
Posted: August 30, 2004 7:00 AM PDT; Last modified: August 30, 2004 7:00 AM PDT
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