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Letters to Silence (Free verse) by MacFrantic
Little anger Wake me to find you there Twisting on coals Shouting out obscenity I worry Swallowing you down inside Tilting my eyes Staring at oblivion Loneliness Damning resignation find me But you there What little angers do This mind What endures such trifling A bottled up universe Long awaiting dawn


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Arithmetic Mean: 6.8333335
Weighted score: 5.493059
Overall Rank: 2772
Posted: August 29, 2005 8:49 PM PDT; Last modified: August 29, 2005 8:49 PM PDT
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[7] nentwined @ 68.232.253.122 | 30-Aug-05/1:02 AM | Reply
I think I'm too tired. I kind of like this. I might even be able to understand it.

I really think I shouldn't be able to understand it.
[9] Dovina @ 12.72.22.255 | 30-Aug-05/11:28 AM | Reply
Yep, it's hard to keep silent. I can feel it! Mostly well said.
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