IT All Starts With My Fears

Member since 2004 · Posted 30 Aug 2004 · 5 comments

Why do you do things to make me cry I wondered and thought for some reason why I keep trying You keep on denying Then I found the reason for my tears It all starts with my fears. My fears in a list Go on though the mist Of a waterpark slide That you ride,ride,ride My fears go down the road One,big,heavy load On a truck,on a train I stand here in pain I've always wonderedwhy I shead these tears But now I know,It all starts with my faers.

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5 comments

[n/a] tisa7 30-Aug-04/1:02 PM Reply

I think this poem makes me sad and want to cry.

[8] electroman1979 30-Aug-04/2:52 PM Reply

i liked it, -8-

[10] frdup717 8-Feb-05/1:41 PM Reply

where did you learn how to write like that?

[n/a] tisa7 7-Dec-05/9:25 AM Reply

I dont know i was upset when i thought of this

[3] nentwined 19-Feb-07/3:53 PM Reply

A list of your fears might be more interesting.