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The Room (Free verse) by darylchew
footsteps
i hear them
walking up the stairs
(floorboards creaking)
down the aisle
he stopped
opening a door-
to the past
as if entering a time-warp,
he saw:
furniture covered with dust,
and ornaments that once shone with glory
picture-frames
long-forgotten faces
like my biography,
events of a lifetime flashed through his mind
briefly remembering
the small girl
who had two front teeth missing
and always pestered him to play "happy family"
he smiled.
quietly,
he leaves.
without touching anything in the room.
only to return the very next day.
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Posted: August 30, 2004 9:18 AM PDT; Last modified: August 30, 2004 9:18 AM PDT
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