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May I Help (Free verse) by Dovina
I sit before you smiling
skirt hiked up and loose
above crossed knee with elbow
a prop for palm and chin
I remember how you drew me
back against your chest
your hands upon my hips
a sunset in the west
I wear this laughing smile
to show you you remember
and still you feel the sadness
winning over joy
Will you take my pensive offer
and prevail above the dark
enjoy for one small hour
just to satisfy my heart?
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6
Weighted score: 5.190725
Overall Rank: 4721
Posted: January 19, 2006 3:52 PM PST; Last modified: January 19, 2006 3:52 PM PST
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See I even know the best comebacks to my own remarks.