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May I Help (Free verse) by Dovina

I sit before you smiling skirt hiked up and loose above crossed knee with elbow a prop for palm and chin I remember how you drew me back against your chest your hands upon my hips a sunset in the west I wear this laughing smile to show you you remember and still you feel the sadness winning over joy Will you take my pensive offer and prevail above the dark enjoy for one small hour just to satisfy my heart?

ALChemy 20-Jan-06/12:13 AM
Nice. I'm not a girl so I can't identify with it but nice.




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