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On The Edge (Free verse) by jauser
NOTE: this poem is written by a friend of mine name: Stephen
Alrite i wrote this last night for my English class, fukin better get an
A for dis
On The Edge
I wake up in the mourning and drive to school
Tired, sleepy, and on the edge
The night before
A mosquito buzzed around my room like a buzzsaw
Keeping me awake, causing me to be
Tired, sleepy, and on the edge
With eyes as red as blood
The day progresses
My teacher just gave me an F on a test
Some kid just accidently spit on my new shoes
A flock of seagulls decide that my car is the perfect place to mark
there territory
As I walk into the parking lot
The rest of the cars seem to be laughing at me
With there clean and unmarked windshields
I see my reflection
And am reminded of how im feeling
Tired, sleepy, and on the edge
As I sloth my way through the halls
The same kid who spit on my shoes decides to impede my motion
He stares at me with eyes of a Tiger
But all I see is a small puppy
Barking furiously in a futile attempt for self preservation
I fall off the edge
But as I am preparing to shorten this persons lifespan
I catch a glimpse of her out of the corner of my sleepy eyes
She pulls me back on to the edge
And thats where I stayed
Sometimes I wonder why I put up with this everyday
But she reminds me
That while the world might make me feel
Tired, sleepy, and on the edge
She makes me feel
Happy, thankfull, and glad life has put me here
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6
Weighted score: 5.190725
Overall Rank: 4712
Posted: May 31, 2004 9:21 PM PDT; Last modified: May 31, 2004 9:21 PM PDT
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