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Potato hail (Free verse) by T. Jonathron Remp
He sheltered her from the yellow frantic winds That tumbled in from the North To Mate with the Winter silence But fantastic thundering bowels rained Potato hail onto the plains and we all Starchily Perished He sheltered her from the yellow Potato winds That Potato in from the North To Mate with the Winter Potato But Potato thundering bowels rained Potato hail onto the Potato and we all Starchily Perished He Potato her from the yellow Potato winds That Potato in Potato the Potato To Mate with the Winter Potato But Potato thundering Potato rained Potato hail onto the Potato and we all Starchily Potato He Potato her Potato the yellow Potato Potato That Potato in Potato the Potato To Mate Potato the Winter Potato But Potato thundering Potato Potato Potato hail onto the Potato Potato we all Potato Potato He Potato her Potato the Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato in Potato the Potato To Potato Potato the Winter Potato Potato Potato thundering Potato Potato Potato hail Potato the Potato Potato we all Potato Potato He Potato Potato Potato the Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato in Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato the Winter Potato Potato Potato thundering Potato Potato Potato hail Potato Potato Potato Potato we Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato Potato

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6
Weighted score: 5.190725
Overall Rank: 4678
Posted: August 2, 2005 12:52 PM PDT; Last modified: August 2, 2005 1:29 PM PDT
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Comments:
[10] MacFrantic @ 207.200.116.65 | 2-Aug-05/1:32 PM | Reply
Absurd! Wonderfully Potato! Superb poem without the potatoing as well! *10*
[5] PoeticOne @ 24.43.122.90 | 3-Aug-05/1:50 PM | Reply
It was ok... but its different, as in unique!
[9] Bethy @ 24.222.32.155 | 3-Aug-05/3:16 PM | Reply
Mr.T Your potato with words is exactly potato...potato rhythm, truely potato unique...Bravo! :)
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