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The Reason (Free verse) by frdup717 The reason that I haven't told you how I truly feel,
is because when I'm around you,
my mind is lost behind the wheel.
My stomache fills with butterflies,
when we meet eye to eye,
I wish that you were here with me,
I'm so lonely I could die.
Up the ladder:
let's get to the end
Down the ladder:
Stranger
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Posted: July 29, 2004 2:47 PM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2004 2:47 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.3585887 Overall Rank: 3318 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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who is this poem about?
its about you
who did you think?
i now that just checking to make sure
ow.
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Has a 50's lyrical quality to it, and despite the indentations and easy sentiment, I like it.