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My Castle (Other) by Cougarchic
In my castle a girl sit alone in the darkness
Shrouded in a cloud of mist
Building the walls ever thicker
Despite all appearances my castle is not what it seems
From afar my castle appears to be a jolly, happy place
But if you come closer you will see a castle ready for war
Both are real but only a part of what lies within
Inside my castle lies a scared little girl
Silently she hopes
Hopes someone will tear down the castle wall
Tear it down before it grows too thick
But she is afraid of what lies outside those walls
Afraid of what might happen if the walls were to crumble
Afraid of the pain she might endure
There are hundred of people with castles like mine
They might just be too frightened to say
So if you find a castle like mine
Shine a light in the window and see if they will let you in
See if they will let you tear down the walls
But be gentle while you tear them down
They might not want to face the world just yet
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3333335
Weighted score: 5.3585887
Overall Rank: 3337
Posted: January 8, 2004 10:55 PM PST; Last modified: January 8, 2004 10:55 PM PST
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