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He Cares So Little About His Self (Free verse) by Hostileintent
Five months ago, my friend I left
But now I see on his body, a theft
When I did leave, me => me he was like
By three months I knew the theft was on a hike
For a year he has commented of a bug
In his stomach it did tear and tug
He slept litte anyway, and lived like an oul
During light he rest, and in the dark he did prowl
But five months now, this killer compounded
And for my friend, my fear is compounded
From a different time zone he works
His stomach gets worse
Little he eats, less than before
If only he cared, cared some more
His t-shirt hangs from his shoulders
His face like a ghost
His body is thinning
He comments, at most
A change, drastic, has come
WHAT HAVE YOU MY FRIEND TO DONE!!??
Eat so much he did, run around and shout
Drink lots of beer and stout
But now, no drink
No exercise
No sleep
No eat
No study
No weight
NO NOTHING
Leave him be you bastard, come to me
Try your shit, I dare thee
But friend, brother, me too it does hurt
Unfortunately it I cannot blurt
Some day home I will return
And you
you
You will be dead.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.3333335
Weighted score: 5.3585887
Overall Rank: 3344
Posted: October 8, 2006 10:35 AM PDT; Last modified: October 8, 2006 2:35 PM PDT
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